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Why choose Query Buddy Editorial?

 

Dana has her BA in Education, and her MA in English and Creative Writing with a Fiction focus. During her graduate creative work, she became an expert collaborator, an intuitive, well-researched reader and literature analyst, and a keen and thoughtful peer critique provider.

 

Dana also has experience as an agented author (who has herself worked through several rounds of editorial edits on multiple book projects), a #RevPit First Reader, and a critique partner to fellow authors. This experience makes her confident in helping you get your query, pitch, and/or manuscript in the best shape possible before sending them off to agents and editors. 

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Still not sure?

 

Check out the testimonials from past clients below!

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If you'd like to inquire about editorial services further before submitting, please email: querybuddyedits@gmail.com.

High-quality editorial services delivered with personal care, honesty, and specialized attention to your writing goals.

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NEW: Writer Resource
A 'Query Buddy' Query Letter

This resource is a downloadable PDF presentation for purchase. It deconstructs and explains the 'formula' for writing a successful query. Dana has created this resource based on her time working with authors from an editorial perspective, along with her own query writing experience. Click the 'PREVIEW' button for a sneak peek; click 'PURCHASE' for the full resource.

Pal Package: Query Only | $30

Choose the Pal Package and get in-line comments/edits on your query letter via a Google Docs document. A short edit letter will be attached in your email critique as well for a summary of overall feedback!

Buddy Package:
Query + Pitch | $45

The Buddy Package includes a critique of up to 3 tweet-length pitches (consider these your elevator pitches) as well as the query critique provided in the Pal Package. All edits/feedback provided will be through Google Docs.

Posse Package:
Query + First 5 | $60

Choose the Posse Package and receive the query critique provided in the Pal Package as well as a critique of your first five opening pages. In-line comments will be provided as well as a detailed edit letter containing overall feedback and editorial suggestions.

Besties Package:
Query + Pitch + First 50 | $200

The Besties Package includes a query critique, pitch critique, and detailed editorial feedback for your manuscript's first ten pages. An edit letter will be provided via email, and all in-line comments will be posted on the Google Doc.

Partners Package:
Whole Manuscript | $20/1,000 words

The Partners Package will include editorial feedback in the form of a 2-4 page edit letter highlighting developmental recommendations. It will be provided via email, and any in-line comments will be posted on the Google Doc.

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For an extra $30 (flat rate fee), we can discuss the edit letter or questions you may have over a 15-20 minute video conference via Zoom or Google Meet.

Querying or Pitching...

In addition to the qualifications listed, Dana has experience pitching in #PitMad, #AAPIPit, and #RevPit.

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She has served as a First Reader for the Revise & Resubmit competition for authors seeking editorial help before querying agents! See her own query stats below - she believes transparency is key in supporting her fellow authors!

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Testimonials for Query Buddy:

"I had Dana look over my query letter and opening pages for my YA fantasy, which at the time was getting nothing but rejections. She was very thorough was able to pinpoint where she felt that pacing was off, and explained why. For the query letter, she pointed out that the stakes were unclear, which, for anyone querying, we know the stakes are of paramount importance. After taking her suggestions, I got my first full and partial request for that manuscript! She was also very communicative throughout and her feedback was very detailed. Highly recommend if you need an extra pair of eyes on your sub package!"

-C.W. Rose

"I hired Dana to do a query fix. She proofread/edited my query and gave me valuable feedback/critique. She was phenomenal to work with. She's professional, her turnaround time was AMAZING, and she kept it honest the whole time. I'm so glad I hired her, and I look forward to working with her again. With Dana, you can't go wrong."

-Trish R.

"Dana is so thorough and thoughtful when it comes to critiquing! She looked over my query letter and pitches, and with her help, I was able to get 4 agent likes, followed by 2 full manuscript requests, during a pitch event. Her comments and suggestions made me look at my query letter and pitches in a different light, and she helped me strength them further in regard to plot clarity, stakes, and character development. Her turn-around time is quick, and most of all, she’s so kind and encouraging in all her comments!"

-Selena Thor

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